Question
Revise the following word groups to remove all fragments and/or parallelism errors.
I like baseball because it is fun and teaches me about the sport.
My Answer
I like baseball, it teaches me about the sport and it’s also fun.
I like baseball because it is fun and teaches me about the sport.
My Answer
I like baseball, it teaches me about the sport and it’s also fun.
Answers
Writeacher
You still have a run-on in there. Where should you divide this into 2 sentences?
Writeacher
Well, wait!
In addition to dividing this into two complete sentences, you also need to do something about the strange phrasing. This doesn't make sense to me: "it teaches me... "
What is "it"?
In addition to dividing this into two complete sentences, you also need to do something about the strange phrasing. This doesn't make sense to me: "it teaches me... "
What is "it"?
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Instructions: revise to remove fragnments and/or parallelism errors.
?1. I like basebal because i...