Asked by antonio

In today's society, many middle class people argue that they cannot build wealth because of wrong choices , over spending, own a car, and rather go to school than work. Ms Sue is this better thesis
Answered by Ms. Sue
Frankly, it's terrible! It does not have parallel structure and it's too long and wordy.

What's wrong with the first thesis idea I posted for you?

Also -- be sure you read the website I posted about thesis statements.

Answered by antonio
I though I need more stuff to put on my thesis.
Thank you Ms.Sue got it!
Answered by Ms. Sue
You're welcome, Antonio.

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