I need to make sure these has the correct punctuation. Ive already done them, i just want to be positive
1.Kenneth scored the winning touchdown, and he was crowned Homecoming King.
2. Eggs and bacon make a good protein-based breakfast so you don’t get hungry.
3. Despite misgivings Jonah ate the green eggs and ham, for he was a fan of Dr. Seuss.
4. The mighty stallion reared and bucked, and pitched the rider in the dirt.
5. The teddy bear fell out of the truck, so it had to be laundered and dried, and then it looked like knew.
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Rethink #s 2, 3, and 5.
1 is fine.
4 seems a bit odd, but needs that comma to separate the intransitive verbs from the transitive one.
4 seems a bit odd, but needs that comma to separate the intransitive verbs from the transitive one.
Thank you Writeacher.
Does this sound better?
2.Eggs and bacon make a good protein-based breakfast, so you don’t get hungry.
3. Despite misgivings, Jonah ate the green eggs and ham, for he was a fan of Dr. Seuss.
4. The mighty stallion reared, and bucked, and pitched the rider in the dirt.
Does this sound better?
2.Eggs and bacon make a good protein-based breakfast, so you don’t get hungry.
3. Despite misgivings, Jonah ate the green eggs and ham, for he was a fan of Dr. Seuss.
4. The mighty stallion reared, and bucked, and pitched the rider in the dirt.
Your original 4 is fine. Take another look at 5.
The others are fine.
The others are fine.
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