Asked by Ingle
I have an essay to write. The topic is What are the chief causes of shoplifting? Are these topics strong thesis statements?
1 People shoplift for immoral reasons.
2 The influence of the social society contributes to shoplifting.
1 People shoplift for immoral reasons.
2 The influence of the social society contributes to shoplifting.
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Answered by
GuruBlue
I think that #2 is far superior.
You can support that thesis; the influence of peer values, the economic crisis, etc. will be great.
You can support that thesis; the influence of peer values, the economic crisis, etc. will be great.
Answered by
Ms. Sue
I like the second one better.
Either in your thesis statement or in your support, you should clarify "social society" as it applies to shoplifting.
A better wording might be -- "The influence of our affluent society contributes to shoplifting."
Either in your thesis statement or in your support, you should clarify "social society" as it applies to shoplifting.
A better wording might be -- "The influence of our affluent society contributes to shoplifting."
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