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Hi Miss Sue, Here is the final draft can you check it for me? Thank you

Dear Grandmother Irene

Happy Birthday to you on this special day!

Shine like a star today on your Birthday.

Have a wonderful time at your Celebration Party.

Wishing you all the best on your Birthday.

How old are you today?
One year older and wiser.
Have a great day today.
Happy Birthday to you Grandmother Irene!
May all your wishes and dreams come true!
Love always your only grandson Joe Smith
Ms. Sue
This is very nice. However, you don't have a declarative sentence.

what would a declarative sentence be?

Would this be right

It is a nice day today.
Ms. Sue
Yes. That's a declarative sentence.

You could make this a declarative sentence by adding a subject and verb.

One year older and wiser

<b>You are one year older and wiser.</b>

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