Asked by Karen

Did I rewrite this run-on sentence correct?

Ellie's new glasses were much stronger than her old ones. As she walked out of the doctor's office the floor seemed to leap up at her.
Answered by Ms. Sue
Yes. That's good.
Answered by t aylor
yep its good
Answered by menna
One of my earrings fell off, it rolled under the stove. I could see it gleaming in the dim light but couldn’t reach it.