1. There are two sentences there. Which do you need to fix ... or do you need to fix both?
2. The entire first sentence contains information that should go into a Works Cited or Bibliography.
3. The first sentence should become a brief citation at the end of the second sentence, which is the one with the actual idea in it.
In a Forbes magazine article from October 2013 Susan Adams wrote of a survey done by the National Association of Colleges and Employers from Bethlehem, Pa. From early August to mid-September that year they asked 200 hiring managers what skills they prioritize when they hire college grads.
I need someone to help me fix this.
I know something is not quite right with this sentence.
Thank you!
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