Question
Is this a good end to my research report (on Albert Einstein)?
On April 18th, 1955, Einstein's life came to an end, and he was cremated, having lived seventy-six years, one month, and four days.
Also, is this a good beginning?
Albert Einstein, a famous physicist of the twentieth century, was born in Ulm, Germany, on March 14th, 1879.
(Yes, this is the same report from before, if you are Ms. Sue)
On April 18th, 1955, Einstein's life came to an end, and he was cremated, having lived seventy-six years, one month, and four days.
Also, is this a good beginning?
Albert Einstein, a famous physicist of the twentieth century, was born in Ulm, Germany, on March 14th, 1879.
(Yes, this is the same report from before, if you are Ms. Sue)
Answers
Ms. Sue
Yes. Both your beginning and ending are very good.
Allison B.
Thanks! :)
Ms. Sue
You're welcome. :-)