(1) Sal looked at the map one more time. (2) She knew that the whole troop was depending on her. (3) Sal couldn’t decide if the trail was to the east or to the west. (4) The map was confusing. (5) Sal was tired. (6) She needed to make a decision.

Question

Which of the following sentences would intensify the suspense in this passage?
1. The sun shone brightly on the group.
2. Sal felt her stomach grumble.
3. One of the troop members blew a note on a harmonica.
4. Dark clouds were gathering overhead.****

Answer 1

Yes, 4.