1. My favorite book is the Tempest. It was written by William Shakespeare. I like it because it was about the happenings on a magic island.
2. My favorite book is the Tempest. It was written by William Shakespeare. I like it because it was about betrayal, magic and forgiveness.
3. My favorite book is the Tempest. It was written by William Shakespeare. I like it because it was about hatred, forgiveness, love story and fantasy.
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Would you check the passages? Correct errors, please. Thank you.
1. My favorite book is Tempest. It was written by William Shakespeare. I like it because it was about the happenings on a magic island.
2. My favorite book is Tempest. It was written by William Shakespeare. I like it because it was about betrayal, magic and forgiveness.
3. My favorite book is Tempest. It was written by William Shakespeare. I like it because it was about hatred, forgiveness, love story and fantasy.
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Would you check the passages? Correct errors, please. Thank you.
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I don't see any major errors, but I'd smooth all this out by combining some of the sentences ... like this:
1. My favorite play is "The Tempest," written by William Shakespeare. I like it because it was about the happenings on a magic island.
2. My favorite play is "The Tempest," written by William Shakespeare. I like it because it was about betrayal, magic, and forgiveness.
3. My favorite play is "The Tempest," written by William Shakespeare. I like it because it was about hatred, forgiveness, love, and fantasy.
1. My favorite play is "The Tempest," written by William Shakespeare. I like it because it was about the happenings on a magic island.
2. My favorite play is "The Tempest," written by William Shakespeare. I like it because it was about betrayal, magic, and forgiveness.
3. My favorite play is "The Tempest," written by William Shakespeare. I like it because it was about hatred, forgiveness, love, and fantasy.
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