sam help please

I'm supposed to do a draft essay on helping a high school senior with improving his grades. 3 recommendation as his friend and there explanations, along with introduction and conclusion sentences. Only one paragraph. ths is the draft any suggestions are a...

Santiago, estás sacando notas malas. Primero, insisto en que tú limites tiempo con tu novia o que estudies con ella. Tu novia te puede ayudar en tus estudios. Segundo, te recomiendo que tú decidas entre tocar la guitarra o jugar para el equipo de fútbol d...

this is the assignment I'm supposed to do a draft essay on helping a high school senior with improving his grades. 3 recommendation as his friend and there explanations, along with introduction and conclusion sentences. Only one paragraph the next posting...

after my b-day party will edit span and send back

Santiago, estás sacando notas malas. Primero, insisto en que tú limites el tiempo con tu novia o que estudies con ella. Tu novia te puede ayudar en tus estudios. Segundo, te recomiendo que tú decidas entre tocar la guitarra o jugar para el equipo de fútbo...

thanks so much

no - we are going to dinner with a group of friends from school - my step-dad always takes me and a few friends out to a really great rest.

is there anything else you think i can add or change to make it better thanks much sam