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In a marriage, I believe that a husband should show emotional concerns to his wife. For instance, husbands should feel free to express the love they have for their wives. In today’s society according to Charles Colson, most men are still uncomfortable exp...

Having an alcoholic parent was the crisis in our family. My father began drinking when he was young in social gatherings. Once he married my mother he began to drink more often. My father and mother did not have good communication skills during their marr...

I'm reading this sentence in my head because I'm in the library. I can't read it out loud. Does this sound right to you? I'm not sure? According to the theories on mate selection, researchers have developed the idea that most people select their mates acc...

Thank you Greg!

yes, I'm actually doing this by sections. I'm posting the paragraphs that I feel need proofreading. Since its hard to post all of my paper on this website. Thanks for helping me again.

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Do I need to add a comma before the and in this sentence? The second most frequent reason is that the couple falls out of love during the relationship and they no longer feel connected or willing to put the effort to make their marriage work

Other reasons why a relationship ends in divorce is the lack of good communication skills the couples use during conflict situations. How's the sentence structure on this one?

Good communication skills also improve the quality of intimacy in the relationship as well as an increase in self-confidence.

Yes, that makes more sense. Wow. thank you for helping me. I wouldn't have been able to figure out those mistakes on my own.

thanks, y’all.