amber jo

here is my thesis statment. would like an opinion. Each day millions of children across the United States go to school to learn, only to instead find violence.

Thesis statement Each day our children go to school to learn, only instead find violence.

How does this sound now? Each day too many of our children go to school to learn, only to witness some form of school violence -- school violence in the form of bullying, disrespect toward authority figures, trash talking, and the secret carrying and disp...

help with compelling and counter argument on school violence

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yes, Zero tolerence is not allowed

I am saying that the schools are not allowing any type of voilence for pushing to weapons.

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How is this? Each day too many of our children go to school to learn, only to witness some form of school violence – schools need to adopt a zero-tolerance policy toward violence of all forms of bullying, disrespect toward authority figures, trash talking...

thank you for all your help.