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I wrote a brief review of a movie, using adverbs, adjectives and using at least three comparatives and three superlatives. Could you please see if I got this right? Adverbs: amazingly interestingly conveniently secretly skillfully Adjectives: hilarious un...

Could you review this outline for a persuasive essay? Was it done correctly? Outline for negative impact of credit card companies marketing to students on campus Com 156 My introduction to the topic and my thesis statement. Introductory Paragraph: Even th...

Can you review this rough draft of an outline for a persuasive essay and provide any feedback? Thanks in advance! I. Introduction Even though some feel as though a student having a credit card can teach financial responsibility, a credit card company shou...

Would this be an effecive thesis statement? Even though some feel as though a student having a credit card can teach financial responsibility, a credit card company should not be allowed to market to students on campus.

I am working on an assignment that requires we write out our thesis statement and then write paragraphs that support this. Can I get your feedback on what I have so far? Thesis Statement: Even though having a credit card can help teach financial responsib...

could you review this for me and provide feedback. I have an assignment that states I need to write my thesis statement then write paragraphs that support this. This is only a draft and I would welcome any comments. Thesis Statement: Even though having a...

Thank you so much!

What they said were to complete an outline. The outline will relate the to a topic I chose and is to be used to complete a final paper. My school program provides a thesis and outline generator and this is what I based my outline on. I didn't think it loo...

Honestly there are no real instructions, that is what has me so lost. The outline generator provides an example after I fill in some blanks and this was basically what it looked like (with revisions done of course). I always thought an outline simply laid...

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Thank you so much! I wasn't sure on the thesis statement but that really helped clarify things for me.

Would it be better written then as this: Even though having a credit card can help teach financial responsibility to some, over-all a credit card company should not be allowed to market to students on campus.

I have another question. When you write a thesis statement such as this and then must write paragraphs to support this can I use this thesis as a beginning of the paragraph? For instance could I begin this way? (very rough draft) Even though having a cred...

Would this be better? The assignment I am working on requires we write our thesis statement and then write paragraphs that support this. This is what has me confused about where to place the thesis statement. Would I use this as the introduction? I origin...

This is where I am having trouble apparently, determining if what I have written can be considered a supporting paragraph. I thought what I had was the beginning of such, but I assume from the question that it wouldn't. I will continue to work on this and...

Thank you so much for the feedback! I will do what you suggested and resubmit. All your help is really appreciated.