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Questions (7)
Make a song about emotions that I can name waves
1 answer
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Make a song about nature, waves, beach, sunshine
Up beat pop song
11 answers
77 views
Make a song that I can name upside down
7 answers
38 views
Make a song about saddness, rain, depression, tears
I don't want it to be cliche I want it to be connectable I want it to be
3 answers
54 views
Verse 1)
You walked right into my life, like an angel in disguise, With your charm and sweet embrace, you got me hypnotized.
9 answers
55 views
Make a r and b song about the love of my life or liking someone.
Make it heartfelt and connectable..
9 answers
41 views
Write a rap song that is SOOOO good and original, about friends, and having fun...that a girl would sing
9 answers
67 views
Answers (21)
Can I use that song? I'll give u all the credit
BOOOOO. Dont say where is Saturday and Sunday.. add it with the rest of the days. Make it modern, use modern words
Where is Saturday and Sunday? Don't use old words like yet or something others won't know.. Keep it simple but catchy
Sounds like a 2 yo Blah Make it about teenager struggles and how it comes and goes like waves, boys(from a girl perspective ), never wanting to stop but always wanting to feel free, life just repeating. Work in the song days, like Monday, Tuesday.. so on
Make it a "it" song Make it stand out with verses that don't match but song great together. Capitalize on the word waves, talk about having fun..water
Nice thx can I take this? I'll give u credit
No that's not even sentences or not even words. I want a song that has the chorus when I say upside down I want it to be like boom (up) boom(side) boom(down)
Is that in a different language I needed in English LOL
Amazing I going to name this, I Won't. Can I keep it as my own? I'll give u credit
No no no no no it's all wrong! I can't sing it! The lyrics are all run-ons! I can't sing anything it's all mixed up fix it
Hmm yea now make it.. spicy. Make me and my audience want to field music and how should I sing it? I don't have a good rhythm
Apply your changes you have my permission. Make it less cliche
What could I change?
Thx.
Radical. Imma name that, My Shinning Star. What do you think?
THATTTTSSS FIREEEEEEE..yessssss thx.. can I use that as my own?
Make it upbeat with at least one rap verse Make it so it will sound good with a beat
Omg the rhyme is terrible! I don't want it to be little kid right I wanted to be big people stuff and stop rhyming that's all you need to work on. I need to wrap the song will that having to swing and swing and swing. It's hard to connect words. And stop
Stop matching words in every sentence and cut down on the word we. Like most rap songs, start out with the course
Make it tough like real world, struggles, boys, Hard rap. Spitting verses
Great just a note, make it a lil less rhymey And more of a melody, and more flowy easier to sing.
