I need ENGLISH help

Here is my intro paragraph to my AP English 12 FINAL paper. I feel like it's really weak and short for a paper that's supposed to be 10 pages long. Please help! Salman Rushdie, the author of Midnight’s Children, and Arundhati Roy, the author of The God of...

Ok I have a huge paper in which I have to compare the writing styles of 2 authors in two of their books. I'm going to compare their use of capitalizations, personification, and similes. I just don't know how to WRITE the paper. I have 3 quotes from each b...