ALISHA

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I open the door to the first room. I look for the switch, the light turns on. The walls are red in colour and the curtains are blue so thick that not a single light can peep through. how can i improve this paragraph??? please help

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MR SPIDER HAS 7 TIMES AS MANY FLIES AS HE DOES BEETLES. ALTOGETHER HE HAS 48. HOW MANY FLIES AND HOW MANY BEATLES DOES MR SPIDER HAVE?

so to improve it i could use more complex sentences and a range of vocabualry or? And would this paragraph be ok: i walk vigilantly to the first room, looking around me if there is someone coming behind me. open the door with great care and let me palm sl...

please read the above paragraph and check if it s is correct and if any changes need to be made

sorry did not see the mistake but in the whole is the paragraph much better than what it was before?

ok thank you for your help