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reword / rewriteIt was in that moment that I realized how much I cared for her, how much she meant to me.
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rewrite / reword I adjusted the rearview mirror, my eyes rushing back to the road.
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reword / rewriteAs I climbed out of the broken window, my eyes darted around, searching for any sign of my grandma.
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reword/ rewriteThe smell of burnt rubber and gasoline permeated the air, mixing with the metallic tang of fear.
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rewrite / rewordThe late afternoon sun covered the highway in golden hues, casting large shadows on the pavement.
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reword/ rewriteCan you hear me?" I called out, my voice laced with fear. She groaned in response, her eyes fluttering open.
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reword / rewriteI had been looking forward to this drive, a chance to clear my mind, but it seemed my mind had other plans.
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reword / rewriteHer kindness and thoughtfulness were both qualities that made me want her more, but they also made me doubt
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reword/ rewriteIt was a realization of strength, that I had the ability to be there for my loved ones in times of crisis. It was
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