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  1. " Today I will be informing you abot the Civil War. The war the tore friends and families apart and slavery. "-Erin Is that a
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  2. What would be a good thesis statement for my intro paragraph?Effect and Evolution of African Americans in Minnesota Intro The
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  3. How good is this intro paragraph?In our world, there are many things that can be accepted as “good” or “bad”. When
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  4. Can someone help me figure out a sentence from my conclusion CONNECTING BACK TO THE INTRO?? Or what can I say to connect back to
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  5. Give me a good intro for a dating profile
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  6. i have to do the personal narrative for unit 2 and I can't seem to come up with a good intro
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  7. i am taking intro to music what words are good to use to critique a choir concert
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  8. I'm having trouble with an introduction. What is the correct way to write an intro and good ways for a leading sentance? please
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  9. when writing an essay is this a good way to do it?:thesis statement body paragraphs conclusion intro
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    2. Kyle asked by Kyle
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  10. Hi! I wrote in here a few days ago about my thesis. I was wondering if I could get some feedback on my intro and conclusion. I
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