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i have gotten a feeback to add background knowlege to realte with family reunifciation what staff can i add? give me 1-2
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i have got the feeback that topic sentence the first setence does not have strong link recommend me topic sentence based on this
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I wrote these 5 sentences for a assignment and would like some feeback on them as to what I may need to work on. 1.Our education
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