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PLEASE HELP!!!!!!!!! I WANNA SEE PROOF!!!!!!!!How is local revision different from global revision? A. Local revision is on
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How is local revision different from global revision? A. Local revision is on a smaller, sentence-level scale. B. Local
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The race began modestly, in 1970, with only 110 people in the race.This revision combines sentences (4) and (5) in paragraph 3.
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What is the relationship between revision and content?A. Correct content makes revision unnecessary. B. Revision links content
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not a question, just want you to check my revision of a draft with an action lead in. this is just the revision of the
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What revision will correct the sentence?"Welcome," the announcer began. "to our fifth annual competition!" A. The word the
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Read the sentence from "Initiation.”And from that time on, initiations didn't bother Millicent at all. Which revision of this
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The following sentence contains a transitional word or phrase:A swarm of mosquitoes meanwhile had discovered the hole in the
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I need help with correctly punctuating this sentence. I am not sure where the period goes. Should it be inside or outside the
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I wrote an essay for English but now we are doing revision techniques to fix it up.The first thing was to take a sentence and
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