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  1. The race began modestly, in 1970, with only 110 people in the race.This revision combines sentences (4) and (5) in paragraph 3.
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  2. How is local revision different from global revision? A. Local revision is on a smaller, sentence-level scale.  B. Local
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  3. PLEASE HELP!!!!!!!!! I WANNA SEE PROOF!!!!!!!!How is local revision different from global revision?  A. Local revision is on
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  4. What is the relationship between revision and content?A. Correct content makes revision unnecessary. B. Revision links content
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  5. not a question, just want you to check my revision of a draft with an action lead in. this is just the revision of the
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  6. How does solid rock become soil?It falls apart and combines with particles in the air. It breaks down and combines with water,
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    2. HELP ME PLZ I NEED MY GRADE TO GO UP!! asked by HELP ME PLZ I NEED MY GRADE TO GO UP!!
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  7. Which revision BEST combines the first two sentences of the paragraph to make a precise claim?A. Cellular phones have become a
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  8. 20. Which revision best combines these sentences to improve sentence variety and style?(1 point) Responses A. Made out of oak I
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  9. Which revision best combines these sentences to improve sentence variety and style?(1 point)Responses A. Made out of oak I built
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  10. Multiple Choice QuestionWhich revision BEST combines the first two sentences of the paragraph to make a precise claim? A.
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