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I am trying these on my own is this correct?1.The service contract...on the whole...applied to upgrade. rewrite: Don't
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I have to underline the word or phrase or clause that is not parallel sentence and then rewrite itThe dog had to choose between
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The following sentence contains a dangling or misplaced modifier. Rewrite the sentence so that its meaning is clear.7. Walking
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Please check the following sentences and let me know if they are correct.Thank you in advance!! Rewrite the following sentences,
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I forgot to put on sunscreen as a result I got a bad sunburn.Rewrite the sentence, and add the correct punctuation. Your answer
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Janelle has asthma therefore she carries around an inhaler.Rewrite the sentence, and add the correct punctuation. Your answer
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Rewrite the following sentence to change vague words to precise words:Learning to play a new video game can be kind of hard, but
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1. Rewrite the following sentence to change vague words to precise words:Learning to play a new video game can be kind of hard,
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Rewrite the following sentence to change vague words to precise words:Learning to play a new video game can be kind of hard, but
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1. Rewrite the following sentence to change vague words to precise words:Learning to play a new video game can be kind of hard,
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