I've made the suggest revisions,

  1. I've made the suggest revisions, as well as change and added somethings. Could you please check if I have fragments, pronoun
    1. answers icon 0 answers
    2. Soly asked by Soly
    3. views icon 470 views
  2. Thus their actions determined their dietand encouraged by others who tried it made food the one choice from which grew all other
    1. answers icon 1 answer
    2. views icon 2 views
  3. What does the underlined sentence in the excerpt suggest about Framton's character? "He made the last statement in a tone of
    1. answers icon 1 answer
    2. GGWP asked by GGWP
    3. views icon 27 views
  4. I tried to eliminate as much wordiness as I could.What final revisions do you suggest? "Freedom has always been one of my
    1. answers icon 4 answers
    2. Victoria asked by Victoria
    3. views icon 565 views
  5. if new information about the behavior of atoms is discovered and verified, then revisions will need to be made to the current
    1. answers icon 2 answers
    2. ms.sue help please asked by ms.sue help please
    3. views icon 873 views
  6. After more than 10 years of proposals, revisions, and re-revisions, the National Conference of Commissioners on Uniform State
    1. answers icon 2 answers
    2. CYNTHIA asked by CYNTHIA
    3. views icon 818 views
  7. If new information about the behavior of atoms is discovered and verified, then revisions will need to be made to the current___
    1. answers icon 1 answer
    2. check my answer asked by check my answer
    3. views icon 1,072 views
  8. Uniform Law for Computer Info Transactions is Offered National Law Journal, August 30, 1999.After more than 10 years of
    1. answers icon 1 answer
    2. Maxine asked by Maxine
    3. views icon 665 views
  9. Uniform Law for Computer Info Transactions is Offered National Law Journal, August 30, 1999.After more than 10 years of
    1. answers icon 1 answer
    2. stressout asked by stressout
    3. views icon 433 views
  10. The Open Window by H.H. Munro (Saki)He made the last statement in a tone of distinct regret What does the underlined sentence in
    1. answers icon 1 answer
    2. views icon 8 views