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  2. How is local revision different from global revision? A. Local revision is on a smaller, sentence-level scale.  B. Local
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  3. The race began modestly, in 1970, with only 110 people in the race.This revision combines sentences (4) and (5) in paragraph 3.
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  4. Read this sentence.Whether I like it or not by tomorrow I must choose a college to attend. Choose the correctly punctuated
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  5. The following sentence contains a fragment or a run-on. Choose the correct revision that creates ONE complete sentence. Eagles
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  6. The following sentence contains a fragment or a run-on. Choose the correct revision that creates ONE complete sentence. The man
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  7. The following sentence contains a fragment or a run-on. Choose the correct revision that creates ONE complete sentence. In 1970,
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  8. The following sentence contains a fragment or a run-on. Choose the correct revision that creates ONE complete sentence. Mr. Nye
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  9. Choose the revision to the underlined sentence that best improves the style of the sentence.A. Yet most Americans know nada
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  10. After being hit by car, I ran over to see if Steven was still breathingWhat is the correct sentence containing a dangling
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