You probably haven't watch the 2013 version of Romeo and Juliet, but I would like your opinions about the the writing aspect of my summary.

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"Directed by Carlo Carlei, the latest movie adaptation of Shakespeare's Romeo & Juliet (2013) begins with a scene of the two rivalry houses, the Capulets and the Montagues, engaging in a jousting tournament, in which the Montagues rein victorious. This victory angers the Capulet house immensely, especially their chosen participant, cousin Tybalt. Thus, when he spots young Lord Montague’s nephew, Benvolio, trying to settle a quarrel between several angry Montagues and Capulets in one of Verona’s marketplaces, Tybalt snaps at him, telling him about his hatred toward the Montague house. As a result, Benvolio and Tybalt fight each other with their swords before Lord Montague quickly intervenes, causing both Lord Capulet and his men to join in the fight as well. Before any harm can be done, however, the Prince arrives and threatens the two houses with execution if they should disturb their town again.
Meanwhile the rivalry houses ponder the Prince’s threat, and young and lovely Juliet is shown preparing for a ball, Romeo is introduced. Devastated by his unrequited love for a woman named Rosaline, Romeo discusses the meaning of love with Benvolio while sculpting among his many stone sculptures. Since Rosaline is of Capulet, Benvolio attempts to persuade Romeo into forgetting about her. However, Romeo refuses. Thus, he, Benvolio, and their friend Mercutio attend the ball hosted by the house of Capulet, where Rosaline is expected to be present. After a rather startling conversation with her mother about marriage and a potential suitor named Paris, Juliet also attends this ball. Instantly, Romeo is drawn towards her, and she to him. They dance and sneak away to an empty hallway, where the two share several passionate kisses before being caught by Juliet’s nurse. Summoned by her mother out of concern that she may be dancing with the son of Montague, as believed by Tybalt, Juliet leaves and Romeo flees shortly after learning of Juliet’s surname. Nevertheless, Romeo has already fallen in love with her and professes his love after he overhears Juliet confess her own feelings aloud upon her balcony. Romeo and Juliet then make plans to marry, seeking help from Juliet’s nurse and Friar Lawrence, a holy man and a friend and advisor to Romeo, to orchestrate their wedding ceremony. Hopeful that their marriage might end the violent feud between the two houses, Friar Lawrence agrees to marry Romeo and Juliet, uniting them in matrimony.
After only an hour of being a married man, Romeo’s joy turns to agony when Tybalt kills Mercutio in a duel. He then considers himself to be “fortune’s fool” after killing Tybalt and any hope of reconciling the two houses. In fear, Romeo flees. Since Romeo merely killed Mercutio’s murder, the Prince’s punishment is only banishment. However, this seems crueler than death to Romeo, given that he must leave Juliet after being recently married, and he tries to stab himself. Friar Lawrence, in response to Romeo’s rash actions, slaps him and talks sense into him, telling Juliet’s nurse, who came in search of Romeo so that he can comfort Juliet, that Romeo will come to Juliet during the night before he leaves the city. Comforted yet anxious for Romeo’s arrival, Juliet waits in her bed chambers, unaware that her parents are orchestrating marriage plans for her and Count Paris downstairs. She doesn’t wait long, though, as Romeo arrives quickly, and the two then make love. Once morning comes, however, reality descends upon them, making it time for Romeo to depart. Thus, they bid farewell with many fervent kisses and tight embraces, knowing that they will see each other again. However, Romeo doesn’t leave the city until he asks Benvolio to watch over Juliet while he’s gone. Of course, Benvolio agrees, watching as Romeo leaves behind everything he’s ever known.
With Romeo gone, Juliet’s life is thrown into what seems like utter chaos. Threatened by her father to be exiled otherwise, Juliet must proceed with her arranged marriage to Count Paris. Even with her decision’s consequences, Juliet still refuses. In fact, Juliet says that she will rather than marry Paris, but the Friar proposes a plan for her to take the drug which will make her appear dead for 42 hours, so that the wedding will be called off and Romeo can come and take her to Mantua. Ecstatic by any opportunity to not marry Paris and reunite with Romeo, Juliet accepts and does as instructed on the night before her wedding. Indeed, she appears dead, rendering her parents devastated by the loss of their only child, turning Juliet’s highly anticipated wedding into a funeral. From the crowd, Benvolio witnesses her body being carried away to the Capulet’s funeral house and rushes to Mantua to tell Romeo about Juliet’s death. Unfortunately, he arrives before the messenger sent by Friar to deliver a letter concerning his plan for him and Juliet, who stops to help a child dying of illness. Devastated by Benvolio’s news, Romeo buys poison from a poor apothecary and rides with Benvolio back to Verona. Having arrived, Romeo bids his final farewell to his cousin, although Benvolio doesn’t realize this at the time, and kills Count Paris when he doesn’t allow Romeo to enter into the Capulet funeral house. After saying his last words and a final kiss, Romeo drinks the poison beside Juliet, moments before she opens her eyes and regains consciousness. Shortly after the two, Juliet realizes what Romeo has done and watches helplessly as he dies in her arms. Filled with anguish, Juliet and Friar, arriving due to learning from Benvolio that Romeo did not receive his letter, weep over Romeo’s death before Friar goes to distract the funeral house’s watchmen, giving Juliet time to say goodbye. However, Juliet cannot bring herself to leave Romeo, thus she commits suicide by stabbing herself with his dagger. Filled with the loss of their only children, Lord Montague and Lord Capulet realize that their feud is unnecessary and reconcile. The film then ends at Romeo and Juliet’s funeral, with Benvolio placing Juliet’s hand in Romeo’s, symbolically linking them together in the afterlife."