You have read “Excerpt from An Isle in the Water,” about a woman who moves back to her old town and its residents’ schemes to obtain her money.


Imagine you are one of the town’s residents. What would you do when Margaret Laffan comes back to town? Would you try to pursue her money? If so, how would you go about doing so? Include descriptive details and dialogue between you and other characters, and use details from the passage in your story.

Your writing will be scored based on the development of ideas, organization of writing, and language conventions of grammar, usage, and mechanics.

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Title: Schemes at the Water's Edge

The sun was just beginning to sink beneath the horizon, casting a golden hue over the quaint town of Wishborne. As I leaned against the weathered fence of my vegetable patch, I caught sight of a figure emerging from the winding road that led to town—Margaret Laffan was back.

“Can you believe it? She’s returned!” I called out to my neighbor, Helen, who was busy tending to her fragrant marigolds.

Helen straightened up, wiping her hands on her apron. “That’s just how the world works! One little inheritance brings everyone crawling out of the woodwork.”

A wry smile crept onto my face. Margaret was a good-hearted woman, but the rumors about her newfound wealth danced in the air like dandelion seeds on a breezy day. It wasn’t long before thoughts of her generous finances began to spiral in my head.

“Let’s not take any chances,” I said, adjusting the brim of my sun hat. “Something's got to be done about it.”

“What do you mean?” Helen bounced on her feet, intrigued.

“We’ll need a plan, Helen. A scheme, if you will. She's always been kind to us, but kindness doesn't pay the electric bill, does it?"

“We could throw her a welcome back party! Make her feel missed. Get on her good side!” Helen suggested, her eyes glimmering with ambition.

“Sure, but we need to make it special—charm her, entice her into our ranks,” I replied, rubbing my chin. “You know how she always loved that old fountain in the park? We could restore it!”

Helen’s eyes sparkled. “Yes! And what if we start a petition to get the park clean? We can say it's for her benefit, but really, it’d be for our own, right?”

“Exactly.” I laughed. “And once she feels indebted to us for our 'kindness,' we can gently suggest some contributions...perhaps a ten-thousand-dollar donation for the town’s upkeep.”

That evening, we gathered with others at the town hall, whispering amongst each other, all fixated on the return of Margaret Laffan. The air buzzed with possibility, and as the townsfolk exchanged furtive glances, plans began to crystallize into something tangible.

“Everyone!” I called out, standing atop a rickety chair in the corner. The room quieted, eyes turned to me. “Margaret’s back. Let’s welcome her with a surprise!”

Murmurs rose, filled with agreement and excitement. “What kind of surprise?” a voice shouted from the back.

“A party! But not just any party. A celebration of our beloved town and a homage to Margaret’s generous spirit,” I proclaimed, soaking in the enthusiastic murmurs that cascaded around the room.

As voices rose with enthusiasm, Helen leaned over and whispered, “How do we ensure she feels special?”

“Leave that to me,” I smiled slyly. “I’ll write a heartfelt speech. I’ll remind her of all her old friends—people who have always cared. We’ll shower her with compliments until she’s practically floating.”

The plans grew from a mere party of idle chat to an elaborate affair, set for the upcoming Friday. We set decorations and baked treats, all under the guise of convenience and nostalgia.

On the day of the grand event, Margaret walked into the twinkling scene, seemingly astonished by the crowd that had gathered. Laughter filled the air, and music floated through the night, drawing her in.

“Margaret, we’ve missed you so!” I exclaimed, stepping forward to greet her, your favorite muffins in hand. “You have no idea how the town has longed for your return!”

“Really? I haven’t been gone that long, have I?” Margaret replied, a rosy blush spreading across her cheeks.

“Oh, but it felt like an eternity,” I quipped, crafting my words like silk. “We’ve faced a void… and now you’re here to fill it. Would you do us the honor of saying a few words?”

As she stepped up to the podium, I caught Helen's eye across the room, and we shared a conspiratorial wink. Soon enough, we’d wheel Margaret’s goodwill into something tangible. We’d remind her how desperately we needed her—how she could save Wishborne with a little generosity of spirit and, of course, a bit of cash.

I felt a twinge of guilt as I listened to Margaret speak, her genuine warmth enveloping the crowd, yet I pushed it down quickly. Charisma and cash: the town needed both. And in that moment, the glimmer of hope that danced in our town was worth all the schemes we could muster.