"You can't qualify for a Home Beautiful credit card until you are 18 years old."
Indicate the alternative that both correctly evaluates the sentence and correctly explains the reason for the evaluation.
A. Good you-attitude because it begins with the word "you"
B. Good you-attitude because it focuses on what the reader will (or won't) receive.
C. Lacks you-attitude because it does not thank the reader for shopping at Home Beautiful.
D. Lacks you-attitude because it does not protect the reader's feelings.
2 answers
I'll be glad to check your answer.
I disagree. I don't think it's a good sentence because it tells a customer what she can't do -- not what she can do.