Writing:Write a letter to Mme Guen't,the medical advice columnist for a Fr. newspaper. Tell her about an ailment you have, explaining each symptom. Tell her what you're doing to get better. Ask her if you must call a doctor. Ask Mme Guerit what you have to do to get better.

Question

I did what I could, can you please fix the rest.

Chere, Mme Guen't

J'ai mal à la gorge. Je ne mange rien. J'ai a mauviase mine. Je fatiguée aussi. Je dois prendre un médicament. J'ai vais téléphoner au médecin? Est- ce que je dois faire pour bonne mine?



French Study Guide - Anna , Tuesday, October 27, 2009 at 7:23pm
I think it is supposed to be longer then this.

French Study Guide - E.G., Tuesday, October 27, 2009 at 8:33pm
Chère Mme Guerit
J'ai une mauvaise mine et je suis fatiguée aussi.
Dois-je appeler un docteur?
Qu'est-ce que je dois faire pour avoir une bonne mine?

That's how I would have put what you wrote.

Aren't I supposed to iclude this ailment in here: J'ai mal à la gorge
I'm confused, please help. thanks 4 ur help E.G,

Answer 1

I am intruding here, in case you are in a rush.

If I read it correctly, what Mme Sra has written are corrections to your text. You basically keep your text except that you replace your sentences where she made corrections.

Another thing, I am guessing here, but you may want to check the name of the columnist, whether it is Mme Guerit or Mme Guérit.

Answer 2

If you meant to say "I have a bad complexion", then you could have said:
"J'ai un mauvais teint".
Thus:
Chére Mme Guérit,
J'ai mal à la gorge. J'ai un mauvais teint (une mauvaise mine) et je suis fatiguée aussi.
Dois-je appeler un docteur (médecin)?
Qu'est-ce que je dois faire pour avoir
un bon teint (une bonne mine.)