Question

Writing sentences and paragraphs. Is this correct?


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Dear Elizabeth,
I am anxious when I found out that you move back to town, and looking for job. My SBU manager, is currently hiring for a production manager. She is SBU manager for ACS. I think you should apply for the job. The requirements for the position are, working with offshore, meeting turnaround expectation, meeting quality expectation, answering phone calls, working one on one with the customer, working one on one with operators, setting up web meeting, testing new programs, ordering supplies, making decisions on hours that are needed work daily, and approving time scheduling off with the co-workers. You are always willing to learn any new opportunities that are offer up, compassionate about other feeling, and extremely good at multi-tasking. It would be a good access to have you join our team.
All my best,