Writing a Narrative Unit Test
Language Arts 8 Q4 / Writing a Narrative
Use the sentence to complete the activity.
The child held on to his mother as the train went by the platform.
the words child, held on, Train, and went are the words that are underlined
Revise the sentence by making the underlined words more precise, adding at least one adjective or adverb, and adding at least one sensory detail.
(Completely original and like a 8th grader wrote it)
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The terrified young child tightly clung to his mother's hand as the thunderous train swiftly passed by the bustling platform, sending vibrations through the ground beneath their feet.
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