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Mr. Henry Axhelm
Math
Period 2, Room 107

I teach five classes a day,
Not students, just classes.
No sense getting involved
With their personal problems.
Nothing in their heads worth listening to, anyway.
They came here to socialise,
To see who's "cute."
So I put my x's and y's on the board
And keep my distance.
On Saturdays I like to fool around
With my ham radio set.
It's been my hobby for fifteen years.
I'm on the air for hours at a time.
It's nice to talk to people
Who are far away.

~By Mel Glenn

Make the Poem Come ALIVE- Write an Anonymous Note to the Teacher

Imagine that you are a student in Mr. Axhelm's class. You recognize that he is not happy with his job, that he is lonely and that he should be happier as a teacher if only he would change his attitude towards students.

There was a choice between 2 activities and I chose this one:

Write a note telling Mr. Axhelm how it feels to be a student in his class and how the experience compares with being a student in a class with an involved, interested teacher.

Here it is:

To: Mr. Axhelm

I remember the first time I entered

your class and saw you. I thought it

would be a wonderful experience to get

to know you. I thought that more than

a teacher you’d be my friend. You

never did let that occur. Learning

seems fun when the teacher looks

interested in the topics and teaches

the students step by step. If you

don’t teach with amusement than it

becomes really hard to focus and

concentrate on what you are teaching.

The way you teach doesn’t just bore

all the students in here, in fact it

must make you tired as well. All our

boundaries aren’t that far away from

you that we don’t want you to talk to

us. We all want you to teach us with

some amount of pleasure. Not just

that, learning about you would be

interesting as well. How will you ever

get to know us your way? I suggest to

you that you change your path from

being unaccompanied to being jointed

with us.

I am able to understand the fact that

you are a teacher, and that teaching

about things is your job. Though,

there are also other teachers in this

school which don’t just teach about

things, but also interact with their

students. Interacting with others is

all a part of life. By interacting

with others you get to know them, and

the whole friendship journey starts

from there. There are many teachers

here who always greet their students

anxiously. With you, it's never like

that. It seems as if you don't even

notice us. I always thought that every

teacher would teach their

students willingly; With you it seems pretty

dull. There is a thing such as

amusement. I know that you have it

located deep within you. It's time

for you to unlock it Mr. Axhelm. I

don't know why you don't talk much,

but please, if there's something

bothering you, then please don't keep

it hidden within. Your sorrow will

get lessened if you share it with

someone understanding. You can trust

me Mr. Axhelm. I sincerely want you to

be happy by heart. Your smile will

light up the whole classroom, and I'm

sure this light will catch everyone's

attention. You will be seen in the

crowd Mr. Axhelm.

Live, Laugh, and Love

From Sara

I'll appreciate all the help you could give me, thank you very much:-)