Write feedback in 2 sentences in agreement. Write in a 11th graders response The author used an omniscient drone's-eye view of the novel helps the to involve the reader in the story because it narrates what the characters are thinking, feeling, as well as their current actions.

Question

For example, "The fat boy waited to be asked his name in turn but this proffer of acquaintance was not made; the fair boy called Ralph smiled vaguely, stood up, and began to make his way once more toward the lagoon." This evidence from chapter 1 exemplifies that Ralph answered Piggy's question being serious and focused on his goal which was to find a way to get organized and to find a way to get rescued. The narrator gives us insights into the character's thoughts and also describes how the characters are doing and how their actions can affect everyone. This encourages the reader by keeping them open-minded and to analyze the characters carefully to be able to judge them based on their actions, thoughts, and feelings this helps readers to really think about the characters and connect with them.

Answer 1

I completely agree with your analysis of the author's use of an omniscient narrative style; it definitely immerses the reader in the characters' experiences and emotions. The example you provided illustrates how Ralph's seriousness in addressing the situation helps readers connect with his determination to bring order to their chaotic environment.