"...as much as her" = as much as she.
"I personally" = repetitive; cut "personally"
"they're" = people or problems??
"which" = referring to what noun?
'Write about how Vita, from Helen on eighty-sixth street is realistic or non-realistic to you.'
Vita, to me, is realistic. Many other girls her age might envy a classmate and want beauty, even though they probably don't know the Greek myths as much as her. I personally can't relate to her problems, but I'm sure many other people can since they're common. All Vita wants is a little attention, beauty, and her father, which is completely normal for a girl her age.
Is this OK?
Thanks
-MC
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Is is possible that Vita wanted closure to the meaning of her life? Such as who she is, where does she stand, and what does it mean? All that was found at the end: She said goodbye to her past.
Nice. I think she was believable also, and her growing "problems" relate to a lot of us.
Nice. I think she was believable also, and her growing "problems" relate to a lot of us.