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Write a story in about 150-200 words based on the following clues : Jayanti -fond of singing -a sweet voice very talented - got a golden chance - audition call - excited- Granny superstitious- black cat crossed the road - Granny made her wait - got late- reached late - lost the chance. All because of superstition.
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Can u please build up a story based on this.
Yes, I could. But I won't.
You'll learn far more from writing your own story. I wouldn't dream of depriving you of that educational experience.
I'll be glad to check your story if you post it here.
You'll learn far more from writing your own story. I wouldn't dream of depriving you of that educational experience.
I'll be glad to check your story if you post it here.
Please correct and make necessary addition.Jayanti was very fond of singing. She not only had a very sweet voice but she was very talented also. It was her dream to become a reknown singer. She got a golden chance to redeem her dream when she got a call for audition. She was so excited to receive this call and started rehearsing and putting in her best to win this audition. On the audition day Jayanti all excited to prove herself , leaves the house when suddenly a black cat crossed her path. On seeing the black cat Jayanti`s Granny being a superstitious lady stopped her from going out immediately and asked her to wait a little. Jayanti did as she was told to but she got late and didn't reached on time for the audition. She felt very sad as her golden chance off becoming a singer was lost because of a mere superstition.
Ms.sue can you please check the story ?. I will be really thankful to you if you will help me with my assignment.
Ms. Sue please help.
I made a few minor corrections.
Jayanti was very fond of singing. She not only had a very sweet voice but she was very talented also. It was her dream to become a reknown singer. She got a golden chance to redeem her dream when she got a call for audition. She was so excited to receive this call she started rehearsing and putting in her best to win this audition. On the audition day, Jayanti all excited to prove herself, had just left the house when suddenly a black cat crossed her path. On seeing the black cat, Jayanti`s Granny, being a superstitious lady, stopped her from continuing and asked her to wait a little. Jayanti did as she was told, but she got late and didn't reach the audition on time. She felt very sad as her golden chance of becoming a singer was lost because of a mere superstition.
Jayanti was very fond of singing. She not only had a very sweet voice but she was very talented also. It was her dream to become a reknown singer. She got a golden chance to redeem her dream when she got a call for audition. She was so excited to receive this call she started rehearsing and putting in her best to win this audition. On the audition day, Jayanti all excited to prove herself, had just left the house when suddenly a black cat crossed her path. On seeing the black cat, Jayanti`s Granny, being a superstitious lady, stopped her from continuing and asked her to wait a little. Jayanti did as she was told, but she got late and didn't reach the audition on time. She felt very sad as her golden chance of becoming a singer was lost because of a mere superstition.
Thank you so much. It was really very kind of you Ms sue.
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