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Jeffrey had had his first starring role in kindergarten, playing a talking stone in a class play. From the moment that he heard the applause and took his bows, he knew he wanted to be an actor. He doodled his name as it would look on a marquee. In his mind, he rehearsed his acceptance speech to the Academy Awards.
“I want to thank my agent…” he imagined himself saying to the crowd.
By sixth grade, he was used to starring in school productions. He played Romeo in this year’s Junior Shakespeare Festival. His brother said he was probably the first Romeo in the history of theater to have braces. Jeffrey liked everything about acting—except for his brother’s comments about it. Brad was not interested in acting.
Jeffrey dreamed of going to California or New York when he got older. Meanwhile, he read the “trades” at the library—the newspapers and magazines of the acting business. He couldn’t believe it when he saw that there was going to be an open casting call in his own Midwestern city. He begged his parents to take him, but they worked on Saturdays and they couldn’t take the day off. He was forced to ask his older brother, the critic.
The part called for a boy who looked about 14. Jeffrey figured he could pass. Unlike Brad, Jeffrey looked older than his age. Brad, on the other hand, at 16 looked more like 14. The boys arrived early at the theater where the auditions were taking place. There were already over 200 kids there. Jeffrey picked up his application. Brad picked up one, too—“just for fun” he said. Each of them then studied the short script they’d been handed. Like all the other kids, they mouthed the words over and over. Some kids found quiet spaces to read their lines aloud, with all the right emotion.
Jeffrey asked Brad to listen to his reading. “Okay, but you have to listen to mine, too.”
“Deal,” Jeffrey answered. Then he read, and, as usual, he was good. Next, it was Brad’s turn. Jeffrey couldn’t believe what he was seeing and hearing. Why hadn’t Brad ever tried out for a play? Where had he gotten all this talent all of a sudden? He asked his brother, “Why haven’t you auditioned before?”
“I was waiting for something big,” Brad replied. (ReadWorks)
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As Jeffrey dreams of making it big in California or New York, he stumbles upon an open casting call in his own Midwestern city. Despite his parents' inability to take him, Jeffrey convinces Brad to accompany him. What unfolds at the auditions is a surprise for Jeffrey, as Brad showcases an incredible talent that he had never shown before. The story ends with Jeffrey questioning why Brad had never auditioned for a play before, to which Brad replies that he was waiting for something significant.
Overall, this story effectively captures the excitement and ambition of a young boy pursuing his dreams. The dynamic between Jeffrey and Brad adds an interesting twist, showcasing the unexpected talent that can sometimes lie dormant within individuals. The story highlights the importance of chasing one's dreams and being open to new opportunities.