"Write a monologue revealing the unspoken thoughts and feelings of one of the characters in "Everything Stuck to Him." Use the personal pronoun "I." Choose one of the following scenes to step into the character's mind: a) the girl sitting up alone with the crying baby, b) the boy sitting alone in the car, or c) the women looking at her finger nails after hearing the story."

Question

I have read this story a few times, but I am having trouble figuring out how to start this monologue. Could you perhaps give me an idea of what the best way to start off would be? Preferably with scene "c"?

Answer 1

How about this for a start?

"Are you going to show me the city after all?" she asked.