Write a good song using the information given below in Tok Pisin.

God see through my heavy heart. Hear my cry because there's no brother help me for the lose of my teeth by drunkard

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Title: God, Yu Lukim Mi

Verse 1: God, yu lukim mi,
Long hevi harts, mi stap,
Mi cri long yu, plis,
Yumi no gat brata,
Ol i no helpim mi,

Chorus:
God, yu ken bihainim mi,
Long dispela sang bilong mi,
Mi lotu long yu, sa,
Bikpela, yu no larim mi,

Verse 2:
Lusim mipela kin,
Teeth mipla no gat,
Bikpela dring i mas,
Me no save lukim,
Helpim mi, God, insait long dark.

Chorus:
God, yu ken bihainim mi,
Long dispela sang bilong mi,
Mi lotu long yu, sa,
Bikpela, yu no larim mi,

Bridge:
Long taim we, mi pilim pak,
Mi yirim yu, mi no wan,
Yu givim save, long hevi,
God, Yu mekim mi strong,

Chorus:
God, yu ken bihainim mi,
Long dispela sang bilong mi,
Mi lotu long yu, sa,
Bikpela, yu no larim mi,

Outro:
God, yu lukim mi,
Long hevi harts, mi stap,
Mi cri long yu, plis,
I go washim mi,
Long nambawan stil, samting.

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