Write a 1 1/2 page narrative about a contest or competition and how it affects the character or characters.

Make sure:
You engage the reader
Introduce the character or characters and conflict (Daniel, nice guy) Jayden,mean kaylee, shy MacKenzie , fair
Describe the setting (Saturday, spring at Harbor Point waterfronts pavilion
Have a resolution

Cake competition

Use specific quotations write in a 7th grader response

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The Sweetest Contest

It was a sunny Saturday in spring, and the annual Harbor Point Waterfronts Pavilion was alive with the sizzling sounds of excitement. Colorful banners waved gently in the breeze, and the enticing aroma of freshly baked goods filled the air. The annual cake competition was the highlight of the weekend, drawing in bakers from all corners of the town. Daniel, a friendly and kind-hearted boy with a passion for baking, had decided to enter for the first time. Amidst the cheerful hustle and bustle, he felt a mix of excitement and nerves.

Daniel had always been known as the “nice guy” in his circle of friends. He would lend a helping hand to anyone in need and never thought twice before sharing his last cookie. He believed baking was about sharing joy, not competition. However, this year was different; he wanted to prove to himself that he could create a cake worthy of the grand prize—a shiny trophy and a year’s supply of baking supplies. But there were challenges. His biggest rivals were Jayden, the popular kid known for his showy decorations, and Kaylee, the mean girl with cuts and insults sharper than her cake knives. “I can’t believe Daniel thinks he can win against us!” Kaylee sneered, flicking her hair with a chuckle.

As Daniel prepared for the competition, he watched shy MacKenzie, a fellow contestant, nervously hover over her table, struggling to get her vanilla cake to rise properly. “You can do it, MacKenzie! Just keep mixing!” he encouraged, hoping to lift her spirits. MacKenzie was known for her soft-spoken nature and her fair sense of competition. When she shyly replied, “Thanks, Daniel,” he could see a hint of confidence blooming in her eyes.

The competition began, and the Pavilion buzzed with activity. Jayden was setting up an extravagant cake, peppered with fondant flowers and glittery icing. “Prepare to lose, everybody!” he declared pompously, earning a few rolling eyes from the crowd. Kaylee, too, was working on an impressive but intimidating black-and-white cake. Daniel felt small as he looked at their grand designs compared to his simple blueberry cake topped with fresh fruit. Despite the pressure, he was determined to stay true to his values and focused on what he loved—baking.

As the baking time ticked down, there were moments of tension. MacKenzie accidentally spilled sugar all over her table, causing her to panic. “Oh no! What do I do?” she exclaimed, looking like she might cry. Daniel, noticing her distress, rushed over. “It’s okay, just take a deep breath! I’ll help you clean up,” he said, and together they managed to rescue her cake. Helping MacKenzie filled Daniel with unexpected joy, reminding him that the heart of baking lay in kindness and camaraderie.

Finally, it was time for the judges to taste the cakes. Daniel stood beside his table, butterflies fluttering in his stomach. He watched as the judges went from cake to cake, complimenting the decorations but also focusing on the flavor. When they finally reached his cake, Daniel felt his heart stop. The judge’s fork sank into the fluffy cake, and the expression on their faces shifted from curiosity to delight. “This is wonderfully fresh! The flavors just burst!” one of them exclaimed.

As the winners were about to be announced, Daniel held his breath. “And the grand prize goes to… Daniel and his blueberry cake!” The crowd erupted into cheers, and Daniel couldn’t believe it. The thrill of victory mixed with the warmth of friendship filled his heart.

After the contest, Daniel walked over to MacKenzie, who was smiling widely. “You really earned this, Daniel! Your cake was amazing!” she beamed. Kaylee, shocked but grudgingly impressed, muttered, “I’ll give it to you, nice guy. You deserved it.” Jayden, noticing the support around them, smiled and clapped Daniel on the back.

In that moment, Daniel realized that the best part of the competition wasn’t the trophy or the supplies. It was the friendships he had strengthened, the help he had given, and the joy of sharing something he loved. As the sun set over the harbor, the air filled with laughter and chatter, he knew this was a day he would always remember—not just for winning, but for the bonds he had formed.