Sentence A should be edited for pronoun clarity. The pronoun "she" could lead to confusion about whether it refers to the teacher or another female individual in the context. A more specific reference could improve clarity.
Which sentence should be edited for pronoun clarity?
A. The teacher told the class that she wanted their papers to be turned in by the end of the day on Friday.
B. As Patricia was walking down the hall, she noticed a sign on the teacher's door.
C. The librarians received the box of new books, and they immediately opened it.
D. He forgot to check his email.
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