Which sentence should be edited for pronoun clarity?(1 point) Responses On the way to the post office with Donald, Gerald realized that he forgot to check his email. On the way to the post office with Donald, Gerald realized that he forgot to check his email. While Cindy and Patricia were walking down the hall, she noticed a sign on the teacher’s door. While Cindy and Patricia were walking down the hall, she noticed a sign on the teacher’s door. The teacher told the class that she wanted their papers to be turned in by the end of the day on Friday. The teacher told the class that she wanted their papers to be turned in by the end of the day on Friday. The librarians received the box of new books, and they immediately opened and unpacked it.

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Which sentence should be edited for pronoun clarity?(1 point) Responses  On the way to the post office with Donald, Gerald realized that he forgot to check his email. On the way to the post office with Donald, Gerald realized that he forgot to check his email.  While Cindy and Patricia were walking down the hall, she noticed a sign on the teacher’s door. While Cindy and Patricia were walking down the hall, she noticed a sign on the teacher’s door.  The teacher told the class that she wanted their papers to be turned in by the end of the day on Friday. The teacher told the class that she wanted their papers to be turned in by the end of the day on Friday.  The librarians received the box of new books, and they immediately opened and unpacked it.

GPT-4o mini · Answer

The sentence that should be edited for pronoun clarity is: "While Cindy and Patricia were walking down the hall, she noticed a sign on the teacher’s door."

In this sentence, the pronoun "she" is unclear because it is not clear whether it refers to Cindy or Patricia. To improve clarity, you could replace "she" with a specific name or use a plural pronoun like "they."