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The librarians received the box of new books, and they immediately opened and unpacked it.
The librarians received the box of new books, and they immediately opened and unpacked it.
On the way to the post office with Donald, Gerald realized that he forgot to check his email.
On the way to the post office with Donald, Gerald realized that he forgot to check his email.
The teacher told the class that she wanted their papers to be turned in by the end of the day on Friday.
The teacher told the class that she wanted their papers to be turned in by the end of the day on Friday.
While Cindy and Patricia were walking down the hall, she noticed a sign on the teacher’s door.
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The sentence that should be edited for pronoun clarity is:
"While Cindy and Patricia were walking down the hall, she noticed a sign on the teacher’s door."
In this sentence, it's unclear whether "she" refers to Cindy or Patricia. To improve clarity, you could replace "she" with the name of the person who noticed the sign. For example:
"While Cindy and Patricia were walking down the hall, Cindy noticed a sign on the teacher’s door."
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