Which sentence should be edited for pronoun clarity? (1 point)

A. • The librarians received the box of new books, and they immediately opened and unpacked it.
B. • While Cindy and Patricia were walking down the hall, she noticed a sign on the teacher's door.
C. • The teacher told the class that she wanted their papers to be turned in by the end of the day on Friday.
D. • On the way to the post office with Donald, Gerald realized that he forgot to check his email.

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B. • While Cindy and Patricia were walking down the hall, she noticed a sign on the teacher's door.

This sentence should be edited for pronoun clarity because "she" could refer to either Cindy or Patricia, leading to ambiguity about who noticed the sign.