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The thunder rolled loudly, and lightning flashed across the sky with a bright bolt.
The thunder rolled loudly, and lightning flashed across the sky with a bright bolt.
The day was dark and dreary as the storms rolled in.
The day was dark and dreary as the storms rolled in.
We were unsure when the dark clouds would move on.
We were unsure when the dark clouds would move on.
The storms caused lots of destruction across our small town.
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The best example of precise language from the provided options is:
The storms caused lots of destruction across our small town.
This sentence could be improved for precision by specifying the type of destruction, but it stands out for including clear imagery of the storms' impact. The other sentences use vague language ("dark and dreary," "unsure," "lots of destruction") that could be made more specific.
