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If you set the plant on the shelf over the fireplace, it might fall off the wall and break.
If you set the plant on the shelf over the fireplace, it might fall off the wall and break.
Mina and Lily arrived at their gallery show after making a stop at Mina's house.
Mina and Lily arrived at their gallery show after making a stop at Mina's house.
Jamal and his cousin left at the same time, but she reached the park before he did.
Jamal and his cousin left at the same time, but she reached the park before he did.
Adam and Richard both made mistakes, but I think Adam is more to blame for what happened.
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The sentence that includes an unclear pronoun is:
Jamal and his cousin left at the same time, but she reached the park before he did.
In this sentence, it's unclear who "she" refers to since both Jamal and his cousin are mentioned. To correct it, you could specify who "she" is (e.g., "Jamal and his cousin left at the same time, but Jamal's cousin reached the park before he did.").
