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A Graduation was at 2:00 p.m., so my mother thought she could have a nice lunch with cake and balloons to celebrate Tyler's accomplishment. Graduation was at 2:00 p.m., so my mother thought she could have a nice lunch with cake and balloons to celebrate Tyler's accomplishment.
B It may have taken him longer than four years to complete college, but the day my cousin Tyler graduated from college was a very big deal indeed.It may have taken him longer than four years to complete college, but the day my cousin Tyler graduated from college was a very big deal indeed.
C Since Tyler's parents are divorced, Mom wasn't sure if she could get everyone together comfortably in one house, but everyone put aside his or her differences to focus on Tyler.Since Tyler's parents are divorced, Mom wasn't sure if she could get everyone together comfortably in one house, but everyone put aside his or her differences to focus on Tyler.
D We all ate a barbecue lunch together, and then us all took pictures of Tyler with every combination possible: Tyler with my mom and dad, Tyler with his mother, Tyler with his dad, and Tyler with me!
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The sentence with a pronoun error is:
D We all ate a barbecue lunch together, and then us all took pictures of Tyler with every combination possible: Tyler with my mom and dad, Tyler with his mother, Tyler with his dad, and Tyler with me!
The error is in the phrase "us all." The correct pronoun should be "we" instead of "us," making the phrase "and then we all took pictures..."
