D. Adding "of warm pumpkin and spices" after "smell" would use more sensory language. This addition evokes taste and smell, creating a richer and more vivid sensory experience compared to the other options.
Which revision would use more sensory language? A. Adding hot before oven b. Adding impatiently after waited c. Adding red handed after caught laya d. Adding of warm pumpkin and spices after smelp
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