Adding “of warm pumpkin and spices” after “smell” would help the paragraph use more sensory language. This addition enhances the olfactory experience, making the description more vivid and engaging.
Which revision would help the paragraph use more sensory language?
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adding “red-handed” after “caught Laya”
adding “red-handed” after “caught Laya”
adding “hot” before “oven”
adding “hot” before “oven”
adding “of warm pumpkin and spices” after “smell”
adding “of warm pumpkin and spices” after “smell”
adding “impatiently” after “waited”
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