Question

Which revision to sentence 6 contains an example of vivid description?
1. She needed to make a decision immediately. ****
2. The troop was waiting, and she needed to make a decision.
3. There was no more time to hesitate; she needed to make a decision, and quickly, too.
4. Sal felt the troop members’ eyes boring holes into her back; she needed to make a decision.

Answer 1

I think there's a better choice.

Answer 2

Is it number 4.?

Answer 3

I think its number 4 because it gives more detail

Answer 4

Yesl