The revision that shows a tone that is judgmental toward women is:
(1) "Men hold more “hard” beats than women. Women usually choose their children over their jobs, while men show more commitment to their work with their willingness to travel and work irregular hours."
This version implies that women are less committed to their jobs because they prioritize their children, which carries a judgmental tone regarding women's choices and career commitments. In contrast, it paints men in a more favorable light for their willingness to prioritize work over family.